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Wait

Stones Screamed, 
Sculpture smiled.
Coal Sighed, 
Diamond shined!
I cried, 
the mirrors Wink!
cuz things change
 in a blink!
Its worth the wait,
Cut the debate.

Ehna War Vel

19 responses to “Wait”

  1. cazzycoop Avatar
    cazzycoop

    This is amazing!

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    1. Ehna War Vel Avatar
      Ehna War Vel

      Thank ya🖤

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      1. cazzycoop Avatar
        cazzycoop

        You are welcome

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    Small 🌏👶

    💓💚❤️💙

    NICE Post 💯

    I am new follower. I hope follow my blog and GROW TOGETHER.

    I invite you to comment on my blog. I would appreciate it very much.

    A CORDIAL GREETING AND THANK YOU 💚❤️💙

    THANKS 🙏👋🫂

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  3. Johnbritto Kurusumuthu Avatar
    Johnbritto Kurusumuthu

    Powerful and poetic reflection on the transformative nature of time and patience.🤝🎉

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    1. Ehna War Vel Avatar
      Ehna War Vel

      😊

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      1. Johnbritto Kurusumuthu Avatar
        Johnbritto Kurusumuthu

        🤝

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  4. Destiny Avatar
    Destiny

    so well said, Ehna🤍

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    1. Ehna War Vel Avatar
      Ehna War Vel

      Thank you 😊

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      1. Destiny Avatar
        Destiny

        my pleasure 🤍

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  5. nickchuckadler Avatar
    nickchuckadler

    I thought I might catch the mirror blink. But deceived, I believe it winked

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    1. Ehna War Vel Avatar
      Ehna War Vel

      That’s how poetry works, isn’t it?! But thanks for reading! 🖤

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  6. Paul - Cawston Greenway Avatar
    Paul – Cawston Greenway

    I like this a lot 👍

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    1. Ehna War Vel Avatar
      Ehna War Vel

      Thanks 😊

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  7. Amelia F. Adjepon-Yamoah Avatar
    Amelia F. Adjepon-Yamoah

    I am impressed when I read poetry! Good job.

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    1. Ehna War Vel Avatar
      Ehna War Vel

      Thank you, Amelia!!

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  8. A BETTER 🌎 (pk 🌎) Avatar
    A BETTER 🌎 (pk 🌎)

    Wish you a happy good night and Christmas 🎄 I hope we continue to grow together and support each other. Blessings 🙏 Greetings 👋🇪🇸 💓❤️🎉🎁🎄

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  9. SiriusSea Avatar
    SiriusSea

    Really Cooool !! ❤

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    1. Ehna War Vel Avatar
      Ehna War Vel

      Thanks for reading ❤️

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