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Tryst

He’s Day
She’s Night,
Between them
World falls Quite.

Ehna War Vel

13 responses to “Tryst”

  1. Priti Avatar
    Priti

    Beautiful lines ☺️👌they are in love 👌

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    1. Ciela Vel Avatar
      Ciela Vel

      Oh thank you, Priti 🤍

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      1. Priti Avatar
        Priti

        ☺️🙏

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  2. Priti Avatar
    Priti

    All your poems are great 👍🏻👍🏻

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    1. Ehna War Vel Avatar
      Ehna War Vel

      Thanks again Priti, I look forward to more of your opinions 😊

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      1. Priti Avatar
        Priti

        ☺️🙏

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  3. Silent Knight Avatar
    Silent Knight

    “In the union of Day and Night, the world finds serenity, a gentle hush where their harmonious embrace weaves a tapestry of peace that resonates with quiet beauty.”

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    1. Ciela Vel Avatar
      Ciela Vel

      🌟🌟

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    luke sales

    ❤️

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  5. Kevin Avatar
    Kevin

    Relentlessly so intertwined, in union body, soul and mind.

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  6. Chuckster Avatar
    Chuckster

    Don’t say…
    He’s gay
    Her stays
    too tight…

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  7. pk 🌎 Avatar
    pk 🌎

    NICE 💚💓💖

    Blessed day 🌞🫂

    Greetings 🙏

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  8. Silent Knight Avatar
    Silent Knight

    Her gentle glow in his quiet world is a celestial dance, where her luminance brings a soft radiance to his peaceful universe.

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