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Poison

 
He choked my Sanity &
 made my heart race.
He robbed me off probity &
spiked my breath's pace.
Swept me off my feet
I was wrapped of his heat.

Girl..who did you freaking pick?

Hmm, Gentleman Mr.Arsenick
POV: This ain't about a guy. 
#lastPhoneCall #Suicide

Crafted on : 8th Feb 2022

I can see that nobody is gonna understand the fact that this poem has a double meaning..

Ehna War Vel

6 responses to “Poison”

  1. Chuckster Avatar
    Chuckster

    Mr. Arsenick. Perfect name, so toxic and it even begins with the word Arse! That’s to the point, cuts to the quick.

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    1. Ehna War Vel Avatar
      Ehna War Vel

      I intended it to be Arsenic the poisonous metal. Never noticed Arse, but that’s a great observation!! Thanks for reading!!✨

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  2. SiriusSea Avatar
    SiriusSea

    Well, done! ❤

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    1. Ehna War Vel Avatar
      Ehna War Vel

      🥂😊

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  3. renzodemasi Avatar
    renzodemasi

    ” I took your poison to see how you suffer
    I took your drugs to see you high
    I took your hand to walk with you
    I lost my mind to lose my love
    When we give up and lose our grip
    When we’d forget all the laws
    And tear down the lights
    When we’d drive through the dark
    To the night wind song
    When I remember these times
    I try not to cry” (B.H.P.)

    La tua poesia mi ha riportato in mente la canzone che ti ho citato sopra e un altro paio ancora 😉

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    1. Ehna War Vel Avatar
      Ehna War Vel

      happy to be evoking memories of good songs!! Thanks for commenting! Hope to see you around more 😉

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